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On earth you must decide whether to follow good or evil. The heart good goes to heaven while the evil to hell; so therefore the is is black and white and both elements exist, and within these lays gray. The world is not good or evil, but both
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BeatrizLagamayo Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010
AGREE! :D
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gatsby26 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010   Writer
thank you :)
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BeatrizLagamayo Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010
You're welcome. ^___^
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nycterent Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2009  Professional Writer
I disagree with the idea and grammar here. :)
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gatsby26 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2009   Writer
ok, I will fix the grammar soon. What are your ideas?
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nycterent Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2009  Professional Writer
Breaking it down:

1. On earth you must decide whether to follow good or evil.

I don't believe most people decide. I know I don't wake up in the morning and think, "I'm going to be evil today." or "I'm going to be good this lifetime." Plus, a lot of people believe they are doing good, or don't even think about it. Whether they are is up in the air.

2. The heart good goes to heaven while the evil to hell;

I don't believe in a heaven or hell. At least, not in the traditional sense.

3. so therefore the is is black and white

Don't understand what this is saying. is is?

4. and both elements exist, and within these lays gray.

But what about other colors like orange and green and magenta?

5. The world is not good or evil, but both

I don't believe in good or evil.


There we go.
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gatsby26 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2009   Writer
ok
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nycterent Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2009  Professional Writer
ok.
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